[size=120]In-game name: Salamander Steam Name: [/size]Natsu Dragneel [size=120]Steam ID: [/size]STEAM_0:1:87307982 [size=120]Rank (Staff/VIP)?: User Age (Minimum 14): 20 Do you have a microphone (yes/no) is it understandable? Yes Which commander spot do you want to take? *visit [url=https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1sgj6_MYeQIUnel8dgTUf9ArIRs04YsQbybW6HgXLkVc/edit?usp=sharing]here[/url] for a commander spreadsheet to see which positions are open* I am applying for the 442nd Commander Postion Summary about you: (50 Words Min) I am a 20 nerd loved star wars since I was 2 I am a ex military sniper I joined when I was 16 got medically discharged when I broke my knee so I am currently working in a 4 star hotel, bar and restaurant. I love doing alot of things such as cooking, partying and alot more. I also love comics, Anime and manga so if your into those things im down to talk. Why should we pick you to be a Commander: (100 Words Min) I think you should pick me because I am currently a Commander on another server even though its ARC I love the 442nd Seige Battalion I also on another server which I was a super admin on I was able to have my own Regiment since I was a jedi General and I picked the 442nd even though it wasn't on the server. When I added the 44nd it was the most popular Regiment on the server untill the server shut down. What makes you suitable for your specific position (Regimental Knowledge, at least 100 Words): As I stated in the section above I know a bit about the 442nd Seige Battalion such as [/size] [size=120]"The battalion was skilled in besieging large enemy fortifications. They attacked large strongholds and bases. The battalion utilized ISP swamp speeders and All Terrain Recon Transports", Also During the Clone Wars, they were sent to aid in the capture of Cato Neimodia, a key Trade Federation stronghold. Also a little known fact they were a member of the 7th star corps along with Dooms unit/company and the battlion known as Sky Troopers and Commander (Unknown) *There is no referance of the name of the Commander of the 442nd but it is known that he was a Marshal Commander so he was on par with the likes of Commander Cody of the 212th.[/size]  

This seems a little vague. "a server" means little to nothing. Personally i would revisit this application to put some cohesive sentences in and possibly some stuff that might get you accepted. Saying that, you have good knowledge of the Regiments lore, but unfortunately a lore nut isnt always a good commander. Instead of putting your vague past, i would reccomend putting something like "I have a very good strategic mind" or "i am strict when it needs to be" rather than a probably made up story about "A Server Roleplay". Overall, its a [color=#c0392b]-1[/color] but if it were redone i would take another look.

[color=#e74c3c][size=200][u][b]Denied[/b][/u][/size][/color] We require you to have more detail in your app. Saying I was a Commander on "this server" isn't very helpful, we want to know "why" we should pick you and not so much past experiences. Past experience is always good but you didn't talk about what is good about you when you command a regiment.